This could be because he was my personal favorite, but she is with Diesel a lot. Roxy spends too much time with Diesel and not enough time with Kenzo. After I got past the main arc of the storyline, I was skipping paragraphs and pages to get to the end. I think it would have at least kept the story interesting. I kind of wish one of them would have died. This whole 4-man romance is hard to relate to and it takes away from the genuine love they feel for one another. This is just a personal preference, but I really wish she would have just picked one guy and stuck with it. It doesn't take long before her lines are cheesy and unrealistic. I'm talking, stabbing each other, cutting each other, licking blood, torture porn-like sex with each page turn. It goes above and beyond the level of 50 Shades and the Dom/Sub kind of lifestyle. Sex with these guys is violent at all times, especially with Diesel. I have never left a book wishing more for a slow, romantic, intimate evening in my life. The entire book takes place over a 6-7 month time period. We have all fallen in love, screwed in every position, in every room, broken down walls that have been built up for years in a person.in one week.

You get almost halfway through the book when you find out that all of this has taken place in one week. It makes the characters seem less relatable than they already are. Near the end there's a slight rise in plotline that makes it sort of interesting, but it is incredibly short lived.

Diesel den of vipers